IS IT OVER? - Chap.2
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yuichan03 Author: yuichan03
Pairing: Chinen Yuri x OC
Rating: PG
Warnings: this is my first ever finished fiction. i don't own JUMP.
Summary: Mochizuki Yui is secretly inlove with her best friend, Chinen Yuri. However, Chinen is just too occupied to recognize her feelings. It's because he was in love with somebody else. Is it over for Yui? Would he just give up her love?
CHINEN's POV
Class hours had just ended. I have finished fixing my things. i stood up and looked at Yui who is still fixing her things. I am going to ask her to eat with me in a newly opened bakeshop. I know she loves cakes more than any sweets.
I picked up my bag and approached her. "Mochizuki Yui," i declared. "I want you to go with me."
She stared at me for a moment then she wore her sweater. "No." then she passed in front of me.
I felt my heart broke. Yui-chan is so bitter, i thought. Of all the girls i know, she is the only one immuned to my charms. She doesn't take my cute actions. Sigh, maybe i am not that adorable? I followed her.
"You're so-"
"As if that's new to you." she said before finishing my sentence. i smirked. "Just why are you following me, Chi?"
"You know, I discovered a newly opened bakeshop. I have eaten some of their cakes and it's heaven." I said. She stopped walking.
Excitement can be seen in her eyes. I knew it, she wouldn't let cakes to pass. "Wanna go with me? My treat."
She did not speak for seconds, she's thinking. "Sorry, but can you treat me some other time? I really need to go to somewhere. A place where there is no Chinen Yuri around." She then continue walking.
"You really hate me, huh." i hissed. "Be thankful that i love you more than any other girls."
no chinen yuri, huh. it's Yui's way of saying that i shouldn't follow her. I really can't understand women. it seems that Yui-chan will be okay so i won't follow her. I'll just call her up later to check on her.
***
YUI's POV
"Be thankful that i love you more than any other girls..."
Those words were echoing inside my head. The nerve of this Chi. I really get pissed off when he says that he loves me.
The truth is, i am really happy whenever he says that he loves me. I really have feelings for him and it grows stronger as days passed by. but i know he doesn't feel the same way. He always say that he loves me, yes. The truth is he loves somebody else. It's just that, yuri loves to play jokes on me-- jokes that my heart does not take as they are.
But those were not the things i need to think for now. Three days from now and it's already christmas. I need to buy a gift for that heartless moron a.k.a Chinen Yuri.
I went inside the mall and start my way to buy my christmas gift for him. Im not really good in choosing a gift for a guy. Good luck for me.
Christmas day, a day of giving.
After going to the shrine with my big brother, i went to the park. Yuri and I decided to spend some time together. I brought my gift for him inside my bag.
I thought I will come first but i see him already there. "Merry Christmas, Yui-chan!" He shouted when he saw me.
I walked hurriedly to him. "Merry Christmas, Chinen Yuri." i said. We started to walk.
he pouted. "You love calling me by the whole name. I feel embarassed."
"i have been calling you that way ever since but you just feel embarassed?" We reached the bakeshop. I can smell keiki. "Cakes, cakes. Hurry, Yuri." I pulled him inside.
We got the table beside the shop glass window. "You're really a cake monster, aren't you?"
I flipped the menu. "Whatever you say."
She grabbed the menu on my hand. "Yui-chan, i have a good news for you. Actually, it was a good happening for me." he said with excitement in his voice. i get back the menu from him. but i remember my gift for him. so i decided to get it inside my bag.
"You remember Umika Kawashima?" he asked. "She already accepted me. I have been asking her to go out with me for about two months and she accepted it just this morning." I stiffened. Are the things i heard true? "Isn't it the best Christmas gift ever?" I almost ripped the gift bag inside my bag.
Suddenly, my eyes became watery. To hide it from him, i just bow my head and let my bangs cover my face.
"Yui, aren't you happy for me? Kawashima and i-"
"I hate you!" i exclaimed. I cannot control it anymore. I cannot control my emotions.
"W-why?" I can feel that he was shocked from what he heard from me.
I let tears fall that fell from my eyes. "You love somebody else yet you still give me reasons to fall." I wiped the tears from my eyes, still having my position. "I know i am stupid to fall because you treat me special." Now i faced him. he was surprised to see me crying. "But i can't help my heart. Im just-- bye." I stood up and went out of the store as fast as i could.
I didn't bother to look the way i was tracking. All i want is to go home and cry inside my room until no more tears would fall.
Pairing: Chinen Yuri x OC
Rating: PG
Warnings: this is my first ever finished fiction. i don't own JUMP.
Summary: Mochizuki Yui is secretly inlove with her best friend, Chinen Yuri. However, Chinen is just too occupied to recognize her feelings. It's because he was in love with somebody else. Is it over for Yui? Would he just give up her love?
CHINEN's POV
Class hours had just ended. I have finished fixing my things. i stood up and looked at Yui who is still fixing her things. I am going to ask her to eat with me in a newly opened bakeshop. I know she loves cakes more than any sweets.
I picked up my bag and approached her. "Mochizuki Yui," i declared. "I want you to go with me."
She stared at me for a moment then she wore her sweater. "No." then she passed in front of me.
I felt my heart broke. Yui-chan is so bitter, i thought. Of all the girls i know, she is the only one immuned to my charms. She doesn't take my cute actions. Sigh, maybe i am not that adorable? I followed her.
"You're so-"
"As if that's new to you." she said before finishing my sentence. i smirked. "Just why are you following me, Chi?"
"You know, I discovered a newly opened bakeshop. I have eaten some of their cakes and it's heaven." I said. She stopped walking.
Excitement can be seen in her eyes. I knew it, she wouldn't let cakes to pass. "Wanna go with me? My treat."
She did not speak for seconds, she's thinking. "Sorry, but can you treat me some other time? I really need to go to somewhere. A place where there is no Chinen Yuri around." She then continue walking.
"You really hate me, huh." i hissed. "Be thankful that i love you more than any other girls."
no chinen yuri, huh. it's Yui's way of saying that i shouldn't follow her. I really can't understand women. it seems that Yui-chan will be okay so i won't follow her. I'll just call her up later to check on her.
***
YUI's POV
"Be thankful that i love you more than any other girls..."
Those words were echoing inside my head. The nerve of this Chi. I really get pissed off when he says that he loves me.
The truth is, i am really happy whenever he says that he loves me. I really have feelings for him and it grows stronger as days passed by. but i know he doesn't feel the same way. He always say that he loves me, yes. The truth is he loves somebody else. It's just that, yuri loves to play jokes on me-- jokes that my heart does not take as they are.
But those were not the things i need to think for now. Three days from now and it's already christmas. I need to buy a gift for that heartless moron a.k.a Chinen Yuri.
I went inside the mall and start my way to buy my christmas gift for him. Im not really good in choosing a gift for a guy. Good luck for me.
Christmas day, a day of giving.
After going to the shrine with my big brother, i went to the park. Yuri and I decided to spend some time together. I brought my gift for him inside my bag.
I thought I will come first but i see him already there. "Merry Christmas, Yui-chan!" He shouted when he saw me.
I walked hurriedly to him. "Merry Christmas, Chinen Yuri." i said. We started to walk.
he pouted. "You love calling me by the whole name. I feel embarassed."
"i have been calling you that way ever since but you just feel embarassed?" We reached the bakeshop. I can smell keiki. "Cakes, cakes. Hurry, Yuri." I pulled him inside.
We got the table beside the shop glass window. "You're really a cake monster, aren't you?"
I flipped the menu. "Whatever you say."
She grabbed the menu on my hand. "Yui-chan, i have a good news for you. Actually, it was a good happening for me." he said with excitement in his voice. i get back the menu from him. but i remember my gift for him. so i decided to get it inside my bag.
"You remember Umika Kawashima?" he asked. "She already accepted me. I have been asking her to go out with me for about two months and she accepted it just this morning." I stiffened. Are the things i heard true? "Isn't it the best Christmas gift ever?" I almost ripped the gift bag inside my bag.
Suddenly, my eyes became watery. To hide it from him, i just bow my head and let my bangs cover my face.
"Yui, aren't you happy for me? Kawashima and i-"
"I hate you!" i exclaimed. I cannot control it anymore. I cannot control my emotions.
"W-why?" I can feel that he was shocked from what he heard from me.
I let tears fall that fell from my eyes. "You love somebody else yet you still give me reasons to fall." I wiped the tears from my eyes, still having my position. "I know i am stupid to fall because you treat me special." Now i faced him. he was surprised to see me crying. "But i can't help my heart. Im just-- bye." I stood up and went out of the store as fast as i could.
I didn't bother to look the way i was tracking. All i want is to go home and cry inside my room until no more tears would fall.
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Date: 2010-09-19 08:20 am (UTC)this is my first ever fic so please bear with me ~ :)
thanks again for reading ~ :)
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Date: 2010-09-20 07:54 pm (UTC)gonna updateeee ~ :)
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Date: 2010-09-19 03:43 pm (UTC)I can't wait to read more of it! =)
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Date: 2010-09-20 07:33 pm (UTC)gonna update ~ :)
thanks for reading ~ <3 <3 <3
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Date: 2010-09-20 03:43 am (UTC)CHINEN BAKA!!!!
I thought he liked her too D:
I feel Yui's pain...
I think all girls go through that...
This was a really good chapter! :)
Hope you update soon! :D
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Date: 2010-09-20 07:50 pm (UTC)that's why i have come up with this kind of fic :P
thanks for reading ~ <3 <3 <3
gonna update ~ :">
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Date: 2010-09-20 08:53 am (UTC)is this really ur 1st ever fic???
u did a great job...
i can't help myself from feeling what yui's feel...
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Date: 2010-09-20 07:53 pm (UTC)thanks, thanks ~ :">
it's really painful, ne ?
thanks for reading ~:)))
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Date: 2010-10-23 11:29 am (UTC)this makes me want to cry... really~
imagine how it would REALLY feel if this happens to you.. </3
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Date: 2010-10-23 12:15 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-23 12:19 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-23 12:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-23 12:28 pm (UTC)and trivia ~ interrview ko siya dito ~ i asked him "what if someone fell in love with your sweetness ? then that time you have somebody else pero FLiRT k lang ng FLiRT~ the girl got angry at u. then its late when you've realized that ur inlove with her? anong ggwen mo?" ahahahha ~
and what chinen did here in my fic, un un sagot niya ~ XD
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Date: 2010-10-23 12:30 pm (UTC)aaaah!! souka, souka! so may mga inspiration pala talga yung mga stories, noh? coool~
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Date: 2010-10-23 12:35 pm (UTC)